Haiku. Mist (5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

Haiku. Mist (5-7-5)

Rating: 4.8


From the mountain top
Mist rises into the sky
Smoke without a fire

Monday, September 7, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 07 September 2015

Exquisitely descriptive And Imaginatively free.

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M Asim Nehal 07 September 2015

And the volcano is inside...............Wonderful, yet another thoughtful haiku.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 07 September 2015

There is no smoke without fire is no more valid. Beautiful haiku.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2015

Exquisite one. Best Haiku. Thanks for sharing.

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Akhtar Jawad 07 September 2015

I don't see smoke without fire s I am a victim of a fire without smoke.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 24 September 2020

smoke without a fire but deep beneath It is full of fire

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Mahtab Bangalee 16 March 2020

nice imagery is created here about the mist

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 February 2019

Mist is covered the mountain top. You have beautifully perceived the entire imagery. A lovely haiku is excellently penned is definitely heart touching. A nice sharing is done really.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 July 2018

You have brilliantly captured the magnificent beauty of a great mountain through this amazing haiku replete with imagery! Thanks for sharing......10

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Loke Kok Yee 12 October 2015

Very well captured, great haiku, Thanks Valsa

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