Hiralal Patil

Rookie - 0 Points (01 JAN 1975 / Jalgaon, INDIA)

Happy Birth Day - Poem by Hiralal Patil

To you happy birth day,
And have a nice day.
If there will be Sunday or Monday,
I will say only today.
Don't be angry with me one day,
Otherwise, I will be boared that day.
God may bless you,
I praise today.
Every one will wish you today,
Happy Birthday! Happy Birthday!


Comments about Happy Birth Day by Hiralal Patil

  • Silver Star - 3,609 Points Wahab Abdul (1/9/2012 6:23:00 AM)

    a very good poem indeed i like the poem..and i enjoyed it toooo.....keep it up...please read my poem, , new ones (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/24/2009 4:20:00 AM)

    Thank you for sharing this happy poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Vijay Gupta (6/3/2008 11:04:00 AM)

    theme of the poem is very good.i like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Gronski (6/1/2008 1:58:00 PM)

    not bad. could use some improvment though. but as for a simple birthday poem, its good. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 1, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, June 1, 2008


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