Ocean Myranda

happy birhday my daughter

A very interesting poem, Myranda.

it sounds like you fell out of gay heaven, right into a gay tree, and hit every gay branch on the way down. and then you grew an uterus.

'I can’t believe I’m losing you!
You can’t leave me!
Please come back, we can’t be through!
My heart is still with thee!
Happy Birthday My Love'

A fervent appeal of poet to her beloved is depicted here. I simply like the meaning and wholesomeness and vigor and passion of the poet. I strongly believe there some mystic element in the poem which makes readers to assume whether the much talked lover went to some place or heavenly abode............. Hats of to the poet. Perfect 10+++++
I wonder if you could my poem with contrasting style..... A Dolly Bird (A Love Poem)

Hmmm.... Am relieved

Thanks Kamal....I've got more replies on another website...I'm glad your my fan! ! lol I have a lot of other poems on here too.... feel free to read them

Its unfair that no one has written any comment about your poem. This is wonderful poem and people should read it and give you more inspiration to carry on with your effort.

I am your fan now and please let me read more of your poems please.

Regards,

Kamal Shakya