sanitra porter

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Happy & Lonely - Poem by sanitra porter

when you held me at nite i became happy. when you kissed me on my lips i became glad.
when you step out the door i became lonely. when you left and didnt return i became sad.
when you hit me in my face i became shocked cause you never did anything like it.
when you left me for one of your h*** i became mad and fierce. now that your gone im lonely all over again

Comments about Happy & Lonely by sanitra porter

  • Rookie - 3 Points Claudia Krizay (2/3/2012 4:28:00 PM)

    sad but very powerful and honest- good one! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie hdhd dudjf (11/11/2011 12:05:00 PM)

    very nice poem..
    but you know, you should be happy you are no longer with such a deserve much better :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Wendee Isaacs (10/27/2011 9:41:00 AM)

    nice poem....really touched my heart (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Claudia Krizay (10/27/2011 9:34:00 AM)

    A poem filled with truth and emotion- beautifully done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Crimson Love (10/13/2011 12:02:00 PM)

    were all alone when it comes to love, perhaps its ones fate, but perhaps its for the best, beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,512 Points Unwritten Soul (10/9/2011 12:29:00 AM)

    Honest ink, you have sweet heart to proud but to be sad is not allowed...haha i wish you keep on doing, inking paper with these words..this is nice poem so, write the next poems okay? _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 525 Points Vipins Puthooran (10/6/2011 12:56:00 PM)

    Song of despair... Well written...
    Those who are lonley because of love really feel the pain of love...
    Good one! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 6, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, October 14, 2011

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