when you held me at nite i became happy. when you kissed me on my lips i became glad.
when you step out the door i became lonely. when you left and didnt return i became sad.
when you hit me in my face i became shocked cause you never did anything like it.
when you left me for one of your h*** i became mad and fierce. now that your gone im lonely all over again
Honest ink, you have sweet heart to proud but to be sad is not allowed...haha i wish you keep on doing, inking paper with these words..this is nice poem so, write the next poems okay? _Unwritten Soul
very nice poem.. but you know, you should be happy you are no longer with such a person...you deserve much better :)
were all alone when it comes to love, perhaps its ones fate, but perhaps its for the best, beautiful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Song of despair... Well written... Those who are lonley because of love really feel the pain of love... Good one!