I never imagined it be so fun to lose my innocence
I was always was told it would hurt
Which it hurts a little but it feels good.....I felt so connected to him
He was gentle at the right time but got aggressive when needed
It was a life changing type of fun
He made it where I never wanted to leave him ever again
I'm so glad I gave into him
I hope he stays with me forever
Because you never forget your first
It's like opening a new door to life
A whole new level to this crazy game called living
Jumping all the obstacles and being rewarded for surviving so far
I gotta tell you.....That reward was fun
The narrative lets the reader have the feel of your life changing experience but I don't agree with your statement 'I never imagined it be so fun to lose my innocence.' You did not hurt your innocence. Nobody can snatch away your innocence. It is a part of your being unless you squander it yourself.
Poetically and artistically written... I rate it 10++++ You may visit my BECAUSE I LOVE HER... Thanks...
a poem of lost innocence that will never be forgotten? ......................well written.
First love, first experience, first step towards a settled life. What an enthralling world it could have been! Very well penned personal experience. Thanks for sharing. Congrats for being the member's PoD. X
What an amazing piece young lady. Sounds like your 'first' won't be easily forgotten...to say the least. Great poem. And CONGRATS' on being chosen 'POD! Such a well deserved honor. I'm giving this a 10++++ rating.
Opening a new door! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Nothing is ever the same after the first time! Good poem, a ten and congratulations on being poet of the day..
Wow! This expands my understanding of the word FUN. I think it is wonderful that people are capable of a multi-level experience composed not just of pleasure but also of belonging, and a sense of spaciousness in life. It is wonderful how an experience can become a vantage point for looking at life. You share all this in a direct, open-hearted way, so it refreshes my questions. I always wonder how and why we have the capability for such an experience.? ? That too is part of the fun! It takes years to digest the meaning of such an experience, so in a sense it never ends.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
hmmmm...nice poem written about the life changing experience. Congratulations, it being poem of the day. Happy reading and writing.