He Said Poem by Angie Raines

He Said

Rating: 5.0


He said he loved me
So I gave him my heart

He said only I he would
Keep in his heart
He said we would never part

He said forever, just you and me
Together forever that's what we would be

He took my heart that
I gave to him and broke it in half
with his evil grin

Together forever that's what he said
But forgot to mention everyone
would also be in his bed

He was right about our life, when said
Together forever until the end
but forgot to tell me the hell I would live in

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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