Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Rookie (3/3/1990 / Al Iskandarī yah)

Heart Of The Sea - Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Atmosphere full of fear
Hard to feel the heat of tear
Heart of the sea turns into steel
That dream is only so real

I Iaid my pencil down
Can't bear no more sound
I only sold the dawn
To gain for you a star

The story teller's eyes
Faked one more tale
About a diary full of lies
Shield me from myself

A nightingale singing the old ballad
A mother entwining her daughter's hair
The father is out teaching his son
How to obey the lord's willing

My life became miserable since I
Started to dream of the butterfly's wings
You've been pulled to the flames
As long as I lived wishing for this moment

This is me breathing what your wings blow to me
Nothing will turn the air pure again since you flew
Into the dark I found myself waiting for you
I'm not an eager seeker i'm just waiting for you


Comments about Heart Of The Sea by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (1/12/2010 1:24:00 PM)

    it's very musical that's what i liked the most....nicely written...thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (1/12/2010 5:54:00 AM)

    Nice write
    enjoyable read (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Merna Ibrahim (1/12/2010 5:50:00 AM)

    Splendid poem! I loved it specially the first stanza, , , Good Work!
    10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 34 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/12/2010 2:26:00 AM)

    This is really a good poem, Hassan, perfectly reflects the title. Imagery is another feature of this beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
    Best wishes.

    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Justin Unanue (1/11/2010 8:42:00 PM)

    A dream. Conducted in the Heart of The Sea. Good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 136 Points Romeo Della Valle (1/11/2010 7:35:00 PM)

    Excellent, brother, what a masterpiece, very deep and meaningful, I really understand what you are saying, from the bottom of my heart, since I speak your language...Great poem, you clearly got your message across...Keep it up! 10+++++(Sorry, brother, I have been having problems with the site when it comes to rating, I try and try, many times, but it won't go through...) Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephanie McKean (1/11/2010 6:39:00 PM)

    This is amazing. Good Job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (1/11/2010 6:16:00 PM)

    owww...this is so nice espeially the last part..cheers.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,220 Points Marieta Maglas (1/11/2010 6:13:00 PM)

    Started to dream of the butterfly's wings

    nice confessional poem belonging to lyrism

    10/10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2010



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