Atmosphere full of fear
Hard to feel the heat of tear
Heart of the sea turns into steel
That dream is only so real
I Iaid my pencil down
Can't bear no more sound
I only sold the dawn
To gain for you a star
The story teller's eyes
Faked one more tale
About a diary full of lies
Shield me from myself
A nightingale singing the old ballad
A mother entwining her daughter's hair
The father is out teaching his son
How to obey the lord's willing
My life became miserable since I
Started to dream of the butterfly's wings
You've been pulled to the flames
As long as I lived wishing for this moment
This is me breathing what your wings blow to me
Nothing will turn the air pure again since you flew
Into the dark I found myself waiting for you
I'm not an eager seeker i'm just waiting for you
Excellent, brother, what a masterpiece, very deep and meaningful, I really understand what you are saying, from the bottom of my heart, since I speak your language...Great poem, you clearly got your message across...Keep it up! 10+++++(Sorry, brother, I have been having problems with the site when it comes to rating, I try and try, many times, but it won't go through...) Love and Peace, Romeo
it's very musical that's what i liked the most....nicely written...thanks for sharing.
Splendid poem! I loved it specially the first stanza, , , Good Work! 10++
This is really a good poem, Hassan, perfectly reflects the title. Imagery is another feature of this beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. Best wishes. Naseer
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Started to dream of the butterfly's wings nice confessional poem belonging to lyrism 10/10