Hello Dear Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
Hello Dear
I was fearless
But now fear has taken over on face
Tiredness is seen
Long chase has become difficult scene
“I will dash against wall”
“I will meet any distress call”
Now I stand powerless
Not in position to stand with heaviness
Time has slipped away from hand
Laziness has appeared with trend
I have lost rapid fire
People look at me with satire
“See the terror in street”
He was not ready to greet”
Such was his golden time
Now totally free with enough of time
I preferred silent smile
As time had passed off meanwhile
I was just a past symbol
Age had appeared without call
Can you imagine inactive life?
Where person is confined forced to live on edge of knife?
Bear all sort of insult from family members
An experience in life to remember
All seniors may be having same hell
No different story to experience or tell
As autumn is preferred by none
I had not sensed it even at once
People often say unpleasant things
Cut jokes and sarcastically sing
Life becomes living hell to bear
No one may come near to say” hello, dear”
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Aileen 'xz4 minutes ago Nice rhymes.. But it's too long Comment +1
really good Yvonne Groover3 minutes ago kinda sad but beautifully written Comment +1
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Mohammad Jahoorul Islam carry on with these good poems...writings are real life...fresh like new winter vege....don't stop the pen...these are good advice too...these are good medicine...bless for all good utterances.... 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1
This poem is about dealing with aging. Mary LemingsLess than a minute ago You captured the feelings of inadequacy, disappointment, and disbelief of someone experiencing the aging process. This aging person struggles to understand where he belongs in life; he also struggles with others perceptions of him. It beautifully demonstrates the darker emotions felt by someone who no longer knows his place or importance in the world around him. Great job!
Contrast KR BALAKRISHNAN2 minutes ago The technique of contrast is used in this poem; and it has come marvelous. Comment 0 good
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I was fearless But now fear has taken over on face Tiredness is seen