Arielle Friese

Rookie (Florida)

Hello-Good Bye - Poem by Arielle Friese

Today u saif hello
but now i wonder
when will you say
good bye.

Today you told me
you loved me
but now i wonder
how
long will that last

Today i knew it would come
you said good bye
and now i lay here crying

Today you told me you hated me
and i knew you wouldnt
love me forever

So now i lay here
crying myself to sleep
because i let you in and fell to
fast now im the one hurt not you


Comments about Hello-Good Bye by Arielle Friese

  • Rookie - 145 Points Robert Roberts (12/21/2011 9:59:00 PM)

    we all have those days where all gets questioned (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 10 Points Guardian of Night (12/21/2011 11:13:00 AM)

    You shouldn't believe that every man you meet will eventually leave you. This is a good poem. Don't stop writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Didier Saidi (11/21/2011 9:48:00 PM)

    i like this too, i relate (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Poet Of The River (10/22/2011 10:34:00 AM)

    : '(how traumatic. good poem tho, great use of emotion. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Romeo Della Valle (10/21/2011 8:30:00 PM)

    Amazing! I really love this powerful write that clearly translates the outburst of your heart and at the same time shows your great poetic talent! You are very young, talented and strong! You will survive and I know that you will keep inspiring the World with more such poignant writes! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K .w (10/21/2011 11:17:00 AM)

    Very heartfelt awesome write! (: (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Crimson Love (10/21/2011 8:34:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem, embrace the hurt, it can only make you stronger. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Shaikh Haneef (10/20/2011 10:28:00 AM)

    it's really a hurting poem but u need to understand that u don't allow every one to get in..... (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,356 Points Unwritten Soul (10/20/2011 9:10:00 AM)

    This is so good...i guess it's something that talk very detail even it was written in not too long...the expression just really cool..i feel real and yes it might be real from your heart, but your hand make it alive in poetry...nice one_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 20, 2011



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