Here Comes The Bus Poem by Brenda Cure

Here Comes The Bus



Here comes the bus,
On the street Lotus Lake.
The leafy tree above your head,
Disturbing my sight;
Sunbeam burns my lips,
Winds blow off your hat;
Not a word spoken,
But the look in your eyes,
Ties my feet.

Here comes the bus,
On the street we walked a thousand times.
Lotus blooming,
Lotus wilting,
But the touch in your hands,
Warms me years.

Saturday, February 2, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: parting
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Hadassah Sendeza 05 February 2019

Brilliant writing and expression, i am torn between past and present - the first paragrah is expressed in present tense, there's a senses of looking forward to - the second paragraph feels like it is in past sense leaving me hanging and giving out a sense of sadness. Beautiful piece - Keep Writing! !

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Brenda Cure 05 February 2019

Hi Esther, thank you for your comment! It seems we have something in common, so you understand my writing. Shake hands! Let's change our sorrows into poetry!

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