Darkness imprisoned me, all that I know now
is absolute horror, I live not I die not
Trapped in my thoughts: without stars
My body can't hold my soul, Nor my
mind controls my physical stature'
To be a rock and no need to roll
I tiptoe toddle down the road, my own
Phantom is taller than my soul and a frown.
I'm about to break downright,
You keep me alive show the way...
Day light dies and a black hole is out of sky,
Does anyone care it? Is somebody up there? None
Take this life, empty inside knocked outside, ouch
I'm already dead, I'll rise but to fall over all again....'
I tiptoe toddle down the road of my own
Phantom is taller than my soul and a frown.
harindhar, this is beautiful man, very creative, keep going......quite successful poem.love it.
Beautiful lines...To be a rock and no need to roll.... Phantom is taller than soul and a frown Very true said, when thoughts gets trapped in darkness, one is swinging between life and death....... Loved reading it. Beautiful way you have presented it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very, very well done. Well put. There is a constant rhythm. With a wonderful picture. Bien!
I'm grateful for your amazing review on the poem ππππ