Violet Creek

Rookie (July 31 / United States of America)

Hold Me


Hold me,
when I cry.
Hold me,
when I yell.
Hold me,
when you just don't know.
Hold me,
when I need you.
Hold me,
when you see me.
Hold me,
when there are no words to say.
Hold me,
when I lie.
Hold me,
when I just can't tell you.
Hold me,
just to show me the way you feel.
Hold me,
when I want to die.
Hold me,
when when I cry.
Hold me,
and never let me go.

Submitted: Saturday, May 07, 2011
Edited: Friday, July 08, 2011

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Akmal Nazir (5/7/2011 3:16:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Very well conceived. Rich in imagery and style. Fine poetics. I rate it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Buried Alive (5/7/2011 3:06:00 PM)

    i think the last line sums up the poem in its entireity (Report) Reply

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