House Of Cards Poem by Katelin Taylor

House Of Cards



What happened to your stupid little house of cards?
That thing you worked so hard to build so delicately
All it took was one good blow
To break the barriers of your paper castle
Your silly little house of dreams
Founded on a shaky, turbulent sea
I'm not the first to tell you
You can't make a life with a dead man
God can,
But you can't.

What were you thinking,
Building a house of cards on something so indefinite, so unsure?
Even on a rock a house of cards will fall.
Are you as unstable as the things you build?
Or are you simply ignorant of your own flaws?
I'm not the first to tell you,
You cannot win a losing game
God can,
But you can't.

Friday, April 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Caleb Gonzales 19 May 2014

Nicely worded and you can visualize what your writing about

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Marisa Eutsler 08 May 2014

this is very good. fantastic job :)

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Marisa Eutsler 08 May 2014

this is very good. fantastic job :)

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