Timothy Weiermann (Friday, August 13th,1993 / Tucson, Arizona)

poet Timothy Weiermann
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However I've hurt

However i've hurt you
It has made my days cold
I only wished it to go away
But it's only deepened my days

However i've hurt us
It's was only to heal the cuts
But together we die
And it's only darkened my skies

However i've hurt you
It has made my days cold
However i've hurt us
It was only to heal the cuts
But apart all it's done,
It's only destroyed a bond of trust

Timothy Weiermann
Submitted: Friday, August 08, 2008

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (3/10/2009 11:31:00 AM)

    the [hurt] is meaningfully penned with chosen diction..vivid to feel..

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  • Madison Yeater (3/10/2009 7:05:00 AM)

    you know, yes it does hurt, but i woulnt let the pleasure be the main reason why you feel as if you have to stay in a relationship, yes its great, but you do what you have to do, and no matter how much it hurts, you have to end it in order to heal your wounds, rather than letting them get worse between the both of you..
    nice.

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  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (8/22/2008 7:31:00 PM)

    no matter how hurt..........the pleasure of it will never runs out of gas.yer know what i'm sayin'? ; ovely piece Tim!

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  • Ron Flowers (8/21/2008 10:11:00 PM)

    A very sincere sound to this poem.

    Ron

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  • Sarwar Chowdhury (8/19/2008 2:53:00 PM)

    ..heart-felt expression.........10

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  • Clarissa Tobey (8/19/2008 1:02:00 PM)

    it sounds so sweet your true feelings have been shown

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  • Anjali Sinha (8/19/2008 12:52:00 PM)

    Hey Tim,

    very sentimental and has shades of melancholia in it---otherwise great write.
    cummon now change this show us that u are different.

    +++++++++10 to you and lovessssssss anju

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  • Victoria Isles (8/8/2008 6:45:00 PM)

    AWWWWWWWW AWESOME! I'm finally reading you're poems. Yes, I am, I know, I'm a lazy idiot.

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