saadat tahir (21011965 / Islamabad-Pakistan)

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Hush!

Hush! Ascetic in the wavy cowl
Holding forth the life's bowl.!

(Islamabad)
(June 15,2009)

saadat tahir
Submitted: Monday, June 15, 2009
Edited: Saturday, August 01, 2009


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  • Bindu Vidyadhar (7/30/2009 11:33:00 AM)

    Made me think of Buddha! ! !

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  • Sonya Florentino (7/7/2009 6:57:00 PM)

    i must say you're good with these riddle poems...

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/7/2009 2:53:00 PM)

    deep in few for many/lovely

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  • Indira Renganathan (7/7/2009 10:25:00 AM)

    Philosophical fun wisely versified...and thanks for your comment on mine Saadat

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  • Rakesh Bedi (6/26/2009 1:06:00 AM)

    Just two lines convey more than pages, wonderful!

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  • surya . (6/23/2009 8:00:00 PM)

    beautifully told in two lines. vivid imagery.you are really talented.
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    surya

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  • Mamta Agarwal (6/21/2009 9:47:00 AM)

    very vivid images, deep underlying meaning- open to individual interpretation.


    Mamta

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  • Hadi Hussain Butt (6/21/2009 4:56:00 AM)

    one word, excellent! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Ritty Patnaik (6/19/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    hey....you have said too much in two lines! genius.compressed thoughts with a lot of meaning.best wishes.
    ritty.

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  • ****TaMaRa HaNaRinG.****** A ThOuGhT MaTe, in USA (6/19/2009 4:15:00 AM)

    a sweet short poem..beautiful writing

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