Briana Renn


I Am Rain - Poem by Briana Renn

I emerge from the slithering vague,
My weeps sprinkle placid droplets to the atmosphere,
And sometimes, I outburst like a bundle of plague,
All the way, I tinkle the saturating hemisphere.

My anger, symbolizes sparkling thunder when the god punishes me with his spike.
My roar, summons the worst out of my eyes, deluges the world with my cries.
My despair, surprises the underworld with a painful and destructive strike,
But worst of all, when I rumble my thousand eyes, everything on its path dies.

Don't overestimate my power, I cannot demand a strike to the level ground,
Don't underestimate my shower, it can release a misery where victims hound.

I am one who soaks my children with liquid, for their survival to give them a sip.
I am one who floods my other children to the sea, for the worst, I am insane.
I am one who shall be in prison and one who shall be mentioned for my heroic worship.
I am rain.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Another poem I wrote when I got bored.

Comments about I Am Rain by Briana Renn

  • Gold Star - 22,327 Points * Sunprincess * (10/14/2012 7:09:00 AM)

    wow this is an awesome poem with great imagery... :) (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 731 Points Ency Bearis (10/11/2012 2:00:00 PM)

    A wonderful cogitations indulge to beautiful simile, great write. Keep up the good work. And, it rhymes you are rain - Briana Renn, rhymes as can be. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 11, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, October 12, 2012


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