Manonton Dalan

Rookie - 300 Points (virginia, usa)

I Can'T Walk Away - Poem by Manonton Dalan

people came from long journey
with smile so beautiful i see
stories were told ears listen
pictures were shown enlightened
happy days spend to remember
they forget heat of summer

clock ticks to one revolution
one stand up rendered a song
we clap our hands and ask more
lady came; she has taken floor
selling tickets for donations
silence some took other options


Comments about I Can'T Walk Away by Manonton Dalan

  • Rookie Tapas Baidya (6/7/2012 4:19:00 AM)

    clocks ticks to one revolution a fantastic poetic line. Thanks for sharing.

    Tapas, West Bengal, India (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,902 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/7/2012 3:43:00 AM)

    This scene is quite familiar. Nice poem.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (6/7/2012 3:18:00 AM)

    ERA'S-the words capture time and life well (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 7, 2012



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