I Cannot Promise You Eternal Love Poem by Rani Turton

I Cannot Promise You Eternal Love



I cannot promise you eternal love; my lifespan
Does not lose itself in the realms of time.
I cannot even speak of the years ahead:
These words, now, remain after being said.

Do not ask for vows I cannot keep.
How does it matter even though you hold
That most precious place in my heart.
I am here today: tomorrow we might part.

Come to me here now in this silent dusk.
Touch me with your gaze. If on life's journey
We meet again, then, that will be enough:
Life has some eternal moments, ah, many such.


Copyright: Rani Turton

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 09 July 2013

I am amazed at how well you express your deep feelings in so little words, so precise! You are a naturally talented poet. Life has some eternal moments, ah, many such.... So true!

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Kelly Seale 28 November 2012

What a beautiful piece this is... simple and to the point, , , wasting nothing, touching everything... your words Rani, are magical... drawing me into your arms... Beautiful.; -) -Kelly.

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Wabi Sabi 24 November 2012

the last stenza sounds very sexy. really nice.

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