I flew but fell
I tried but failed
So I stepped back
I know I lack
But hey don't mock
The door's unlock
I'll be gone for a while
Far enough say a mile
And when I'm good
So fine real good
Back-off give way
Walk fast no delay
Get off my face
Don't leave a trace
I'll claim what's mine
Never yours just mine.
You flew out a long time back. Please come back now, Naida! :) Jokes apart, this is a simple, nice poem. Thoughts of a sensitive mind well expressed. I visited your beautiful country for twelve days in 2016 and liked every place I visited and people I met.
Part 3. But if nobody tried boldly, for the first time, man would still be the same barbaric tribe nude and dirty, fighting in the wild for existence with other beasts…
Part 2. But unless you try for the first time, you are never going to make it. It is but natural that you fall once or twice when you start. But we need to. Albeit the fact/truth that if you never try, you never fall (c)
" I flew but fell //I tried but failed " … Nice way to start this brilliant poem. As a "Bird of Flight" it comes to you naturally to fly. It is in your genes. (Contd) ..
A brave soul, a fiercely independent soul.... write your poetry and bravely face the world! Nice write.10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A nice self asertion and poetic imagination, Naida. You may like to read my ars poetica named as (Poetic Sense-1) Thanks