naida supnet

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Friend Rain - Poem by naida supnet

When you can't hold back the tears
From streaming down your face
The rain comes to the rescue
Saving you from appearing blue.

From hair down to your cheek
No one will know you're weak
The rain comes to the rescue
Saving you from the public view.

It camouflages and comforts
It helps you hide the pain
If you feel like shouting out
No worries there's the rain.

With every dropp you blink
With every blink you think
That when the rain is done
Your pain is almost gone.

You wipe away the drops
As you wipe away your tears
They'll never know your frown
Rain never brings you down.

You're thankful to the rain
A blessing in disguise
A very helpful cane
To anyone who cries.


Comments about Friend Rain by naida supnet

  • (8/13/2016 8:10:00 PM)


    Well written! I like how rain become the protector of tears! (Report) Reply

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  • (8/13/2016 8:09:00 PM)


    I like how rain has become the protector for tears! Love this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/23/2015 7:26:00 PM)


    Wonderful friendship in this beautiful poem. The rain is also my friend in the context of watering my plants... (Report) Reply

  • Philo Yan (8/7/2013 2:05:00 AM)


    Your poem has described tears of sorrow and pain beautifully (Report) Reply

  • (2/7/2012 2:28:00 PM)


    A really poignant poem and well crafted and bittersweet. (Report) Reply

  • (1/4/2012 8:52:00 AM)


    a nice combination of human feelings with rain, , , , , really a good work, , , , , , , (Report) Reply

  • (12/26/2011 8:48:00 PM)


    Some deep thought went into making this poem. Great poem (Report) Reply

  • Robert Roberts (10/25/2011 10:42:00 AM)


    marvellous writing it brings out the truth behind us hiding behind our fake smiles pretending everything's ok (Report) Reply

  • Maia Padua (10/10/2011 7:11:00 AM)


    Nice, nice piece...wonderful write..
    makes me ponder the story of rain and my friend..
    my friend and his friend the rain
    (Report) Reply

  • (9/22/2011 6:46:00 AM)


    the Rain hides the pain. :) (Report) Reply

  • (8/30/2011 4:14:00 AM)


    From hair down to your cheek
    No one will know you're weak
    The rain comes to the rescue
    Saving you from the public view.

    I like this stanza... this said it all... love this poem...
    (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)


    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)


    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)


    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • (8/29/2011 10:00:00 PM)


    nice poem I like it...if only the rain were to fall everytime we cry and no one would know to misinterpret our tears. (Report) Reply

  • Aqeb Benazir (8/14/2011 5:45:00 AM)


    this poem is filled with substance and cohesiveness. like the aspects it expressed. the first stanza is a nice touch. (Report) Reply

  • (3/26/2011 2:17:00 AM)


    one of your favorite, if i may say...looking forward for poems talking about, your coffee.noodles.lemon.eggs. you love those things before i just don't know now....just correct me if I'm wrong.. (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2011 1:42:00 AM)


    The rain is such a blessing..........Praise God! (Report) Reply

  • Deep Dark Soul [poet] (11/23/2010 6:10:00 AM)


    Oo kung lamang ay umulan sa loob (Report) Reply

  • yellowbell alamanda (11/11/2010 7:37:00 PM)


    I love this poem the way it sound like rain
    memorable as memories poured..
    surely, readers can relate to this when
    they experienced how it feels like being under the rain
    either your crying or dancing...rain is a good element to
    the piece! :) really a friend!

    Ganda! Miss Naida.
    10v.
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011


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