naida supnet

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The Same Moon - Poem by naida supnet

As I stare at the moon above
Can't help but to feel sad
That I am admiring it alone
Admiring the beautiful moon.

But though he is far and away
A thought made me okay
He's staring at the same moon
And he will be home soon.

Comments about The Same Moon by naida supnet

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (12/20/2015 4:50:00 AM)

    and he will be home soon.. full of the feeling of waiting in love. who is this lucky man..? thank you for sharing your inner feelings (Report) Reply

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  • Khairul Ahsan (1/10/2014 10:33:00 PM)

    I think lovers all over the world do this. Look at the moon or a bright, distant star and think of their loved ones. If the separation is for long, they long for their quick return. They spread the glowing moonlight on their bodies and feel a warm embrace of their beloved.
    Wonderful! 10/10.
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  • Luna Tsuki (8/16/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem, I like the second part. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Cristina Teodor (11/29/2011 6:21:00 AM)

    Romantic, deep and touching verses. I'll always be a moon admirer..Cristina Teodor (Report) Reply

  • Allemagne Roßmann (8/30/2011 5:37:00 PM)

    Parapsychology with the moon.Sometimes i wish it happens what yu wish.If it does not though people will call you a lunatic, i will still call you a poet (Report) Reply

  • (7/26/2011 5:59:00 AM)

    Universal objects always give solace. Great philosophy of life is reflecting in these humble lines. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Hans Vr (7/25/2011 6:53:00 PM)

    This poem really touches, very moving. The love for the moon and the warm feeling you get by the fact that he is looking at the same moon, followed by this very nice forward looking message. Fantastic. It makes the reader feel good. That is a great, great achievement of a poet. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • (2/8/2011 2:04:00 AM)

    you have a very unique way at looking at things...which results in amazing poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Elena Toledo (2/4/2011 9:38:00 AM)

    I really like this one very much, sad but the hearts pang speaking

    Thank you
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  • (1/30/2011 11:28:00 PM)

    wonderful and hopeful... i got the same (Report) Reply

  • Malaya Roses (1/26/2011 6:20:00 PM)

    Lovely hope and lovely wish. Deep faith in your heart makes this poem so calm and beautiful.

    Well done.
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  • (11/14/2010 10:25:00 PM)

    short verses but relays deep longing. Nice write, Nadia. (Report) Reply

  • (11/9/2010 10:33:00 PM) the white moon... the poem too illuminates itself with the feeling of solace and longing.. nice poem.. (Report) Reply

  • (11/5/2010 10:29:00 PM)

    I feel like this often this is cute. (Report) Reply

  • (11/4/2010 5:05:00 AM)

    this really sweet! love sure can inspire.great poem (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2010 10:28:00 PM)

    Awwwww.... Really sweet poem Naida. It is really cute.9/10 (Report) Reply

  • (11/1/2010 12:05:00 AM)

    Very nicely written, short but you tell it all. It's so strange how we can find solace in the moon. Such a comforting effect. I love how even you are seperated you can look at the same moon and have that great bond. Nicely put. (Report) Reply

  • (10/31/2010 6:22:00 PM)

    Thats when you are looking at a blue moon until he returns..nice one..regards (Report) Reply

  • (10/30/2010 2:07:00 PM)

    I n’ he sharing same Moon but different result soft poem… thanks for sharing Hon’ble Poet Naida
    Ms. Nivedita
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  • Star Crossed Lady (10/27/2010 8:11:00 AM)

    i loved it. mother moon is always there. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 19, 2010

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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