naida supnet

Veteran Poet - 1,545 Points (bayambang, pangasinan, philippines)

Ah...Women - Poem by naida supnet

I thought of EvE, when ADAM trusted her
They were both banished, became so unpure
But they have made it, and mankind began
You and me here we are, we owe them one.

I remember HELEN, and why she ran away
Because of her beauty, cities became astray
But who would ever doubt, a maiden so inlove
She would do it again, for the man that she loves.

Also there's Diana, the only England's rose
With her beauty and charm, instantly we froze
As she walks with her grace, her worries are kept
Then she went all at once, the whole world wept.

And who would forget, CLEOPATRA so great
With her brains and her beauty, men pile at her gate
She can charm anyone, who attempts to be near
But be ready for the pain and the hurt, do you hear.

Hey, there's HERA, the sole Olympus Queen
She will hinder anyone, who comes in between
Her eyes, her intuition, she believes all her life
A true picture of wife... the always jealous wife.

Ah women, Some are EVE, some are DIANA
CLEOPATRA, HELEN, or the goddess HERA
Whoever we are, whoever we may be
Let us do what we're called for, we are WOMEN and all.

Comments about Ah...Women by naida supnet

  • Rookie - 123 Points Maia Padua (6/16/2015 4:39:00 AM)

    I love this Naide! so nice to read. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 445 Points marvin brato (10/28/2013 9:24:00 AM)

    Historical narration in poetic form....great idea! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (10/7/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    the true beauty of woman lies deep within the heart. She is the carrier of birth, the mother of creation. Long live the woman. excellent (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,424 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/9/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    You have written in praise of women's beauty and talent. Some for men too, perhaps? ? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 348 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/1/2013 1:42:00 PM)

    I like your accuracy in words, a new vision. Very very good.
    We have to remember that. We are just women coming back to our history (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,545 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (7/30/2013 10:43:00 AM)

    @Adheez Van Der Beanthz- I thank you for sparing time for my poem. I love Athena too, but when I was writing this piece I thought of Hera who will represent a wife who is always jealous, funny though, but maybe I will find time to write about the strong and brainy Athena SOON. Again, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (7/30/2013 9:11:00 AM)

    wow, this is brilliant
    i love the way you interpret the women in various forms
    although I am a little disappointed because you prefer to choose Hera rather than Athena : p
    but after all, this is a great poem
    thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lorenzo A. Fernandez Jr. (7/4/2012 2:31:00 AM)

    ah, women, good piece, although some may not be a thing of beauty as they age. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ruby Tonacao Campos (3/5/2012 7:55:00 AM)

    Great piece. I can feel I am in this piece of art.
    Keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie (De Va) (10/31/2011 10:43:00 PM)

    Love this...great flow....good choice of women, as we are all women...ha blessigns (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (10/18/2011 6:43:00 PM)

    Bravo...its brillant...I love the suttle ways you have incompossed the great women of the world...bravo. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fragments Of Light And Love (10/11/2011 7:09:00 AM)

    youre a genius...i wish i could express myself that way....congratulations. this poem is great (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Maia Padua (10/10/2011 7:03:00 AM)

    wow...First time I read like this..
    this is so nice to read...makes me smile...
    two thumbs up Naid, This is such a pleasure to read.
    sarap basahin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Maia Padua (10/10/2011 7:02:00 AM)

    wow...First time I read like this..
    this is so nice to read...makes me smile...
    two thumbs up Naid, This is such a pleasure to read.
    sarap basahin (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Diana Rose Tolentino (10/3/2011 4:09:00 AM)

    it made me wonder on what category i belong to.
    this poem doesn't only describe women, it also stimulate our mind.
    Great write as always.. thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (9/23/2011 7:39:00 AM)

    Nice poem and and a good way to remember
    The strong women of the world. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nicolaa Gallardo (9/14/2011 10:27:00 AM)

    It is very much a lovely poem. I believe not in the ways men think when they say women are not taken seriously. Its a true power we have for we are all made equally divine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points marvin brato (9/13/2011 4:11:00 AM)

    Yes, my wife was a cleopatra! Profound write! A 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vinod Kumar (9/11/2011 10:27:00 AM)

    Great review in the history to trace out the beautiful blessed lives, you can find out each and every heroins and heroes from the history and appreciate their presence in the full screen of their times, thanks for sharing.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Clifford Villaflores (9/3/2011 12:28:00 AM)

    nice facts about women.

    so true and they were all beautiful women.

    my ending to your poem would be.

    Ah women, oh beautiful creation
    So true beyond imagination
    Carefree, a wonderful companion
    Like music flowing in reverberation. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, February 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 7, 2011

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