Eyan Desir (caribbean)

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.. I Fly Away..........................(new version)

Life's celestial shores
Traps me! Like prison bars
I fall as a victim
To it's bitter roots
Struggling, fighting
To swallow some juice
Behind life's doors
I wear the black suit
Sadness sits on their face
Like birds I fly away
To a land of gladness
Where joy never ends.





June 11th 2009
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Eyan Desir
Submitted: Thursday, June 11, 2009
Edited: Saturday, September 26, 2009

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  • Rup Pokharel (9/12/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    I like the way your emotion how is tamed
    and sensation tracked.
    Good piece of art of yours.10+++

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  • Obinna Eruchie (8/14/2009 1:13:00 PM)

    Wonderful to fly away from that torment. Beautiful expression of feeling.

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  • Maia Padua (7/20/2009 9:18:00 AM)

    deep thoughts...
    expressively written
    Life is just like that...
    10+++

    Maia

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  • thisoul ofmine (7/2/2009 8:12:00 PM)

    yet another good write.10

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  • Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (6/25/2009 5:29:00 AM)

    full of expression with a wonderful flow.....10

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  • Cindy Kreiner Sera (6/23/2009 7:50:00 AM)

    Trapped behind closed doors - yes I too would fly with the birds - free....a positive alternative

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  • shalini sundararamalingam (6/23/2009 7:42:00 AM)

    nice poem, other side of land always seems green but nothing is better than what god has suggested us to live with..... poem flows well.....

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  • Kesav Easwaran (6/22/2009 5:04:00 AM)

    Expressive write...thanks...10

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  • Akram Saqib (6/20/2009 5:39:00 AM)

    fluently written poems gives joys and this poem is fluent and affluent in contents and idea

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  • thisoul ofmine (6/18/2009 5:53:00 PM)

    dark yet beautiful. the flow of this piece is superb. great write.10

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