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I'm The One Who Is Always There

Though I'm homeless and lonesome as the wind
I'm not that helpless
I do my best to unwind
When it's cloudy or rainy on your mind
I'm there
To blow any blue make things refined
I never let you be despair
I'm the one who is always there

(2008/5/14)

Submitted: Wednesday, May 14, 2008
Edited: Monday, May 19, 2008


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  • Fahim Sayed (5/18/2008 2:04:00 AM)

    Lovely...Quotes sir........really nice................

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  • Harley Marie (5/17/2008 12:41:00 PM)

    wow this is really touching...

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  • Tsira Goge (5/16/2008 3:09:00 PM)

    ' Though I'm homeless and lonesome as the wind'
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    NIGHTINGALE, Beautiful comparison enriches your poetry.
    And good poetic shapes do by it unforgettable...
    Tsira

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  • ... ... (5/15/2008 10:24:00 AM)

    That's beautiful, flawless poem there a 10/10, for me as your rose I'll give you a 20.

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  • C. P. Sharma (5/14/2008 8:59:00 PM)

    Awesome poetry. Thank you for sharing it. Your poem takes me back to Shelley:
    'Be thou, Spirit fierce,
    My spirit! Be thou me, impetuous one! '
    Keep it up.

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  • Thad Wilk (5/14/2008 5:14:00 PM)

    Nice read Shiraz, so good to know some people still care and are always there
    for someone in need! *10*! !
    Best regards! Friend Thad

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  • M M (5/14/2008 3:24:00 PM)

    A fine tender poem, showing all your caring... Beautiful words.

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