Ive seen the full moon but not you
ive seen the sunrise and sunset but not as beautiful as you
because now that your far away from me
i really miss you like crazy
because like the sun misses the flower
like the fish misses the water
like the star misses to shine at night
like a cage bird misses to fly high
coz you know what i feel when im away from you
its the feeling like dying just by missing you.....
It's really hard missing someone, you have put it into Beautiful words here. May I invite you to read my new poem called, Running wolf.
i feel the young love and its intensity as i read the verses you are an inspired young guy and a budding poet write more inspire young people like you in the magical world of poem writing
i love the way you put your words into a poem especially comparing your emotions into the elements of nature. i can feel the intensity in every word. keep writing dadolph and allow me to proofread: -)
Beautiful! About missing somebody special is very hard and painful, I know the feeling since I have written maybe half of my poems for that special woman that broke my heart some years ago and still I think about her. I just posted a poem titled: SUDDENLY... Randolph, my friend, for you this is your beginning and this sad but loving write becomes your stepping stone into the Poetry World! 10+++ Keep inspiring the World with your talented writes! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a well woven concept of metaphor, a poignant but to its true when missing someone - a good write from a young mind like you, keep up the good work