When I look into your eye
I can see a billion sights,
Like the stars in the sky
That for attention vie.
When I look into your heart
I wonder how beautiful can be the earth,
That raises roses amidst the scorn
Of hundreds of sharp piercing thorns!
When I look at your serene face
Its warm and radiant grace,
I raise a toast to the rising sun
That proclaims aloud that the day has begun.
This is a lovely write Rajesh I Your darling's face and the rising sun give new hopes and promises of a future brightly unfolding! Enjoyed!
I can see a billion sights, Like the stars in the sky That for attention vie.... Very beautiful expression shared definitely that highlights the romantic mood. That proclaims aloud that the day has begun. Here love matters a lot to rise again. Interesting.10
A Beautiful romantic poem poured out from poets heart. A wonderful way to raise a toast to the rising sun, where a new day begins with glowing sun.
Thank you Rajnish, Valsa, Tiku & Deepak for having reviewed the poem and offering encouraging words.
This is a beauty and deserves all the praise for so wonderfully crafted to make it shine like a jewel.....Rajesh....... thanks again for phenomenal composition....10
such between lines.simple and beautiful with a nice flow.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly a romantic poem which explains the beauty of beloved through the interplay of nature's forces. Thanks for sharing the poem, Rajesh ji.