Jesus James Llorico

I Saw You - Poem by Jesus James Llorico

'I saw you standing beside the tree
Surrounded by lush of greenery
A beauty that everyone would be
Jealous to this pleasure that I see
As gentle winds whispers tenderly
At nearby hills and through the valley
The meadow glows as hearts befell
This stellar night that spread magic spell
As my joyous heart sings to the moon
Serenading with a soothing tune
With flowers, dreams and tender songs
And butterflies dancing all along
Filled with praise and astounding passion
This flourish display of perfection
Standing like a sweet flawless portrait
That transformed me to be a poet! '

Comments about I Saw You by Jesus James Llorico

  • Silver Star - 4,260 Points Soumita Sarkar (9/17/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    Good Write.........thanks. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Bronze Star - 2,639 Points Jesus James Llorico (9/13/2013 8:13:00 PM)

    Thank you Angel, as ever, my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 235 Points Angel Lockwood (9/13/2013 7:53:00 AM)

    Oh yeah, Sereno -
    I really like it. Smiling while reading it. You go! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, September 14, 2013

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