I Shared My Experience In Brief Poem by Aftab Alam

I Shared My Experience In Brief

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He climbed, on that mountain,
Reached the peak, and caught
A handful of cloud,
It was his dream,

He simply enjoyed, got hand wet,
He slipped and fell over the pond,
Shouted- -
Ample water available here, than there
Though I fulfilled my dream,
Yet, it was useless—


Dream is not only to fulfill but it must be useful
Useless dreams are nothing but sorrow and grief
This much for you, I shared my experience in brief
Realize your dreams; dream must not be doubtful,

Tuesday, December 9, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: Dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Md Asadullah 14 December 2014

Indeed! Dream is not only to fulfill but it must be useful, you shared your experience in brief however carries a big message, nice one :)

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Salini Nair 12 December 2014

Dream is not only to fulfill but it must be useful Useless dreams is nothing but sorrow and grief................inspirational write...like it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2014

Sharing the experience of dream is of course wonderful at the moment and later it goes far from the reality. Wonderful and very nice.

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