Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 39,733 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Coming Of Jesus - Poem by Aftab Alam

Jesus came, Jesus came, Jesus came for us
Jerusalem is shining bright, Jesus came for us

On the roof before the dusk, Jesus came to us
Tears roll, bare sole, song of praise, rush n rush
Old and young, every one, Jesus came to us
Seek and shy, wide opened eyes, Jesus came for us

Jesus came, Jesus came, Jesus came for us
Jerusalem is shining bright, Jesus came for us

Forgotten the war, from the far, car or bus
For a glance, a lovely chance, Jesus came for us
For the Peace, Arab or Greece, Jesus came for us
Birds that sung, cloud that hung, a dying curse

Jesus came, Jesus came, Jesus came for us
Jerusalem is shining bright, Jesus came for us


Poet's Notes about The Poem

This is about the Arrival of Jesus, When he will arrive and after arrival the Jerusalem
Will be surrounded by the Angels and the men and women, all enchanting and preying forgetting their own identities they all will be..to have a glance of Jesus….there will someone to identify him as many will claim himself a Jesus

Comments about Coming Of Jesus by Aftab Alam

  • Veteran Poet - 1,381 Points L. E. O. Gibraltar (1/28/2015 1:49:00 AM)

    What a joyful song that inspires ultimate hope! Thanks.

    *Birds that sung, cloud that hung, a dying curse*

    Thank God that Jesus came for us and for that course he died as well. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (9/21/2014 3:41:00 PM)

    a very thoughtful poem about the coming of Jesus well penned (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,453 Points Jesus James Llorico (6/8/2013 9:29:00 PM)

    well penned, written just like a song... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/7/2013 4:40:00 AM)

    Well penned, it the bomb, to die for, great work (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,160 Points Valsa George (6/5/2013 1:11:00 AM)

    A lovely poem that can be sung with the accompaniment of a musical instrument! ! A beautiful hymn or ditty full of expectations on the glorious second coming of Jesus Christ! ! Enjoyed! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (6/4/2013 4:55:00 AM)

    The second coming must be wonderful! Welcome! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (6/3/2013 4:58:00 AM)

    A lovely poem Aftab with hope. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 428 Points Ruby Mostazir (6/2/2013 1:52:00 PM)

    Definitely Prophet Isha (Jesus) (PBUH) will arrive to make peace on our earth....a great poem.10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (6/2/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    that's the spirit.. you are there.... and that's the thing that is here.. lovely poem.. bro... very sweet and politically correct...10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,597 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/2/2013 4:14:00 AM)

    My dear Aftab, you are really a great poet of humanity, For a poet preservation of creatures are important, for the larger interest of the world. thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 2, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 4, 2013


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