(06-06-1978 / karachi)

poet Asif Baloch
What do you think this poem is about?

I want to write

I want to write on something
Extreme
Make you to hear my painful
Screams
Screams of my heart and
Tormented soul
Screams of those yearnings which
Never yearned

I want to write on feeling I
Gained
Make you to feel my inner
Pain
Pain of loneliness and
Shattered dreams
Pain of the lost love which
Never ought

I want to write on my dying
Heart
Make you to weep just single
Tear drop
Tear for the rhymes I wrote
With blood
Tear of sympathy of not
Being loved

I want to write on death
Instead
Make you to smile and toast
Thou raised
Toast for the death of another
Useless being
Toast for the broken heart with
Hushed screams

Submitted: Tuesday, November 04, 2008
Edited: Monday, May 03, 2010

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  • Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/5/2009 3:52:00 AM)

    want and urge to write/ how lovely

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  • Reshma Ramesh (11/30/2008 6:28:00 AM)

    pain and sorrow all too evident..............well penned

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  • *Trusting You* (11/27/2008 6:56:00 PM)

    Tear for the rhymes I wrote
    With blood
    Love those lines. good job.
    Becca

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  • Ben Gieske (11/26/2008 3:17:00 PM)

    This poem certainly expresses a lot of feelings and passion. Reminds me of the painting, The Scream.

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  • Gargi Saha (11/5/2008 1:21:00 PM)

    A very hear breaking mournful poem.

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  • Seema Chowdhury (11/4/2008 11:48:00 PM)

    another sad poem asif.... why? ? ? come out of this whirlwind of pain.face this life and get a hold of yourself. ride your life, don't let it ride you.... you can do it. try try again.

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  • Seema Aarella (11/4/2008 9:25:00 PM)

    dont let the sorrowing winds fill the vaccum of ur abode...let them as a visiting guest.....and make love ur permanent resident!
    wishing u all cheers....always
    seema

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  • JOSEPH POEWHIT (11/4/2008 1:37:00 PM)

    This poem seems to have done it well

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