Asif Baloch

Rookie (06-06-1978 / karachi)

I Want To Write - Poem by Asif Baloch

I want to write on something
Extreme
Make you to hear my painful
Screams
Screams of my heart and
Tormented soul
Screams of those yearnings which
Never yearned

I want to write on feeling I
Gained
Make you to feel my inner
Pain
Pain of loneliness and
Shattered dreams
Pain of the lost love which
Never ought

I want to write on my dying
Heart
Make you to weep just single
Tear drop
Tear for the rhymes I wrote
With blood
Tear of sympathy of not
Being loved

I want to write on death
Instead
Make you to smile and toast
Thou raised
Toast for the death of another
Useless being
Toast for the broken heart with
Hushed screams


Comments about I Want To Write by Asif Baloch

  • Rookie - 20 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (8/5/2009 3:52:00 AM)

    want and urge to write/ how lovely (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (11/30/2008 6:28:00 AM)

    pain and sorrow all too evident..............well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie *Trusting You* (11/27/2008 6:56:00 PM)

    Tear for the rhymes I wrote
    With blood
    Love those lines. good job.
    Becca (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ben Gieske (11/26/2008 3:17:00 PM)

    This poem certainly expresses a lot of feelings and passion. Reminds me of the painting, The Scream. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Gargi Saha (11/5/2008 1:21:00 PM)

    A very hear breaking mournful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 600 Points Seema Chowdhury (11/4/2008 11:48:00 PM)

    another sad poem asif.... why? ? ? come out of this whirlwind of pain.face this life and get a hold of yourself. ride your life, don't let it ride you.... you can do it. try try again. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Seema Aarella (11/4/2008 9:25:00 PM)

    dont let the sorrowing winds fill the vaccum of ur abode...let them as a visiting guest.....and make love ur permanent resident!
    wishing u all cheers....always
    seema (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 142 Points Joseph Poewhit (11/4/2008 1:37:00 PM)

    This poem seems to have done it well (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, May 3, 2010


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