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I Write In Dreams

I am a dream
I walk in the billows
I dance in the exhalations
I swim in the clouds
I love without consequence
I curl within hearts
I laugh upon wakes
I kiss all the possibilities
I dare danger
I twirl in gauzy light
I tease eyelids fluttering
I arch my back
I stretch my legs
I whisper to you in daylight
I own you in rest
I am an artist
I paint in thoughts
I am a poet
I write in dreams

Submitted: Tuesday, February 19, 2013

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  • Kieran J96 (3/21/2013 11:02:00 AM)

    I'm not sure how to describe this, it shows how a poet can capture and create dreams, the words can evoke dreams in those that read/her them- that's my interpretation anyway, nice poem :)

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  • Titi Dale (3/16/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    Nice :) I'm a fan! What I like about this poem is the way it flows, without even needing rhyme. Great job!

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  • Titi Dale (3/16/2013 3:50:00 PM)

    Nice :) I'm a fan! What I like about this poem is the way it flows, without even needing rhyme. Great job!

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  • Aldrich Suarez (3/5/2013 8:24:00 PM)

    ...................................A wonderful dream.. :)

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  • Wulan Permata Puri (2/27/2013 10:41:00 AM)

    Keep dreaming! Keep writing! I'll look foward, and i agree with Alexander

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  • Thomas A Robinson (2/26/2013 1:41:00 PM)

    Very beautiful Aria.Your dreams indeed should be written about. They appear to be vibrant, living entities
    worthy of beautiful words.Keep dreaming!

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  • Yuliy Valenko (2/19/2013 9:36:00 AM)

    Very beautiful, but I agree with Alexander.. And I want to add that it does not flow, maybe a little bit shorter? I give an 8 anyway! God bless!

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  • Babatunde Aremu (2/19/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    Nice poem. I think the poem writes reality in imaginative form. Gtreat write

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  • Gajanan Mishra (2/19/2013 8:40:00 AM)

    I am a poet I write in dreams. Thanks. I like it.
    I invite you to read my poems and comment.

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  • Alexander Coppedge (2/19/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    Your art has great taste and appeal Still to fine tune the pice it needs work

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