Rookie - 3 Points (30/07/1958 / TRINIDAD and TOBAGO)

Ice Maiden - Poem by ENOCH JOHN

Oh, Ransomed soul.
Oh, heart aglow.

Divine sparks that fly
From the fiery anvil of tests;
memories dimmed by suffering
Float about my mind
in distant squeakish spasms,
Mesmerising my soul
in silent solemn awe
Like a beautiful ice maiden
Frozen in stride.

Comments about Ice Maiden by ENOCH JOHN

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (10/4/2008 12:40:00 PM)

    'Mesmerising my soul
    in silent solemn awe
    Like a beautiful ice maiden
    Frozen in stride.'

    Amazing composition.
    Love it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Joseph S. Josephides (iosif S. Iosifidis) (9/22/2008 3:11:00 PM)

    I like it. Frozen maiden...the poet wants to preserve the Beauty, in a nice, short well penned poem. I give it a 10. Thanks for sharing divine verses our poet, Enoch (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gone with the wind (7/29/2008 1:18:00 PM)

    Wonderful...very divine and revealing..loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Desantis (5/7/2008 3:08:00 PM)

    Very deep man........a beautiful ice maiden huh, frozen......almost as if your hearts stuck in a position...i really liked. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 1, 2008

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