ENOCH JOHN

Bronze Star - 2,309 Points (30/07/1958 / TRINIDAD and TOBAGO)

Valentine Love Song - Poem by ENOCH JOHN

Cover me with your beauty sublime;
Stain upon my heart the dying echo of love.
Plant in my bosom the eternal seed of hope
And I'll reap a harvest of fulfilment.

Ignite upon the window of my heart
The everlasting fires of hope and liberty.
Permit my ear to hear, the rippling chords
Of the melody of your love song.

A love song sung in dire earnest
As in unison both hearts quietly beat.
Hide me under the wings of your passion
And I'll rest in contentment forevermore.


Comments about Valentine Love Song by ENOCH JOHN

  • Enoch John (2/19/2016 2:13:00 PM)


    Thanx guys for all the beautiful comments. (Report) Reply

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  • Enoch John (2/19/2016 2:12:00 PM)


    Thanx guys for all the wonderful comments. (Report) Reply

  • (2/16/2016 10:24:00 PM)


    Fantastically beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points. (Report) Reply

  • Souren Mondal (2/16/2016 8:34:00 PM)


    Such a beautiful poem.. You very aptly capture the spirit of love. Thank you for sharing - :) (Report) Reply

  • Paul Amrod (2/16/2016 6:20:00 PM)


    Hi Enoch, I love this piece however I am an idle musician as well and would like perhaps suggest a small change. Although chords can be broken chords and occasionally construct a melody they usually have the function of supporting the melody that at best soars out of the chordal progression. I would modestly present instead of the word Of (Of the melody of your love song) perhaps guiding giving birth to engendering or creating. I love the simple expressiveness of your style. Thanks for sharing, Paul (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (2/16/2016 4:17:00 PM)


    Awfully impressive poem. Really one of the warmest, sweetest poems I've ever heard! Great stuff! (Report) Reply

  • Susan Williams (2/16/2016 1:35:00 PM)


    Well done- it bears and/or bares a youthful love so intense so wholehearted that it can carry us through many a barren year. (Report) Reply

  • Anita Khelawan (2/16/2016 11:42:00 AM)


    OMG.... this poem is sooooo orgasmic and refreshing... i look forward to writing about and feeling a love like this... thanx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A (2/16/2016 8:15:00 AM)


    Indeed love song kindles passionate delight as never before! (Report) Reply

  • Benjuzzy Okpuzor (2/16/2016 5:56:00 AM)


    Nice one you are good writer please keep it up, check out my recent poems here (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (2/16/2016 5:33:00 AM)


    So well written poem I really liked it. The song of love well sung.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (2/16/2016 12:18:00 AM)


    Soothing and mesmerizing to young and young at hearts, while it can be tantalizing to some. Beautifully crafted. Deserves it's placement. X (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 12, 2008


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