vanessa hughes

Freshman - 502 Points (28/8/62 / Birmingham)

If People Loved People! - Poem by vanessa hughes

Less and less people
Seem to care
About each other
And more about their
Material belongings
Their clothes, their car
If they loved more people
The world would be a far
Better place for everyone
We'd see more respect
If people knew better
They'd be able to connect
To others with empathy,
Understanding and kind
If people loved people
We'd have happier minds


Comments about If People Loved People! by vanessa hughes

  • Freshman - 643 Points Ruth Walters (1/14/2013 12:55:00 PM)

    Love the message in this poem, if only (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 140 Points John Brown (11/10/2012 7:05:00 AM)

    Good poem - Good message. I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 947 Points Adeline Foster (8/9/2012 4:29:00 PM)

    What a lovely idea well expressed. Pity someone else hadn't thought of that before. Read mine - Indebted -
    Adeline (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 390 Points Joseph Anderson (4/20/2012 8:01:00 AM)

    Amen-A profound plea, well expressed, but when will it happen.Love thy neighbor-Thanks
    for these beautiful thoughts-Joe (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (3/1/2012 10:22:00 PM)

    This is very true and well discussed. However, can you move so I can put all my stuff here. Sheeee! Some people. Move will ya! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (9/25/2011 4:59:00 PM)

    It's always poetry like this that warms my heart. If people loved people, yes, the world would be so beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points The 4am Poet Worm (7/31/2011 12:34:00 PM)

    a wonderful state of mind...: D made me smile.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,860 Points Walterrean Salley (7/5/2011 12:39:00 AM)

    Beautifully said. I totally agree. my vot is a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 63 Points Eric Cockrell (6/23/2011 7:38:00 AM)

    you're exactly right... thank you for saying this! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, May 13, 2011


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