In Essence Poem by Romeo Della Valle

In Essence

Rating: 4.8


Here I am, patiently
Delineating the boundaries
Among the centrifugal forces
Touching my now complex life
Hoping to see again
An undistorted image of myself
When facing the mirror next time...
Carefully avoiding the trap
Of another love's addiction...
Living within a world
Filled with misunderstandings
And contradictions...
Ignorance, indeed,
Turns out to be a blessing
For lack of knowledge
You need to give no explanations...
But when wisdom becomes your domain,
And true changes are implemented,
Destiny by default,
Shall welcome the sunset
Of a new and brighter life
Stronger and well redefined...


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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 05 October 2009

In essence all facts mentioned are honest and true. This piece is well crafted.10+

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Ramin Chaman 04 October 2009

A good poem... and very rapturous... Thanks for sharing ...

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Jean Dament 03 October 2009

Well said & well written. It is very thought provoking. Great job! spelling error-'garantees'-should be 'guarantees' Thanks for sharing. Ravensong

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 03 October 2009

Romeo, you are clearly an excellent writer. I appreciate your gift and recognize your abundant talent. You are blessed to depict images that 'sit' on the right emotions.

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Tai Chi Italy 03 October 2009

I like your attitude! Keep it up! lol Beautiful put Smiling at you tAi

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