rose flores rosevoc2

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In November Rush - Poem by rose flores rosevoc2

Did you miss me?

I got busy drawing hands

All those hands: leaders', workers', servants'

And yours the most!

The clouds bothered on some nights, their shapes unpredictable

as your laughter and grin -

I miss your eyes

And those times you couldn't answer my favors, but just look at me

How innocent your gaze!

And your mouth pursed like a moon

And your face glowed like tequila

I adore you.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

For Vocations. very first draft. Mama Mary, pray for us.

Comments about In November Rush by rose flores rosevoc2

  • Gold Star - 4,683 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (12/1/2012 2:05:00 AM)

    part by part elaborated! Nice to read! (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,836 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/9/2012 1:33:00 AM)

    A lovely heartwarming poem i enjoyd! So gud to read. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 7, 2012


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