DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK


In The Clouds - Poem by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

In the clouds
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Blue is the sky
From east to west
Happy and swift
Is the dawn riding in
Leaving behind
The waning moon
Lonely and forlorn
And winds sleepily
Caressing the meadow,
Trees and valley
The air smelling sweet
And taking the morning mist
You pray and sit
Meditating on Him
For strength and peace
To sail through the day
Yet in the stillness of your soul
There creeps in a melancholy
Dislodging the serenity
And shattering the dreams
Over the thought of a last grief………


Comments about In The Clouds by DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (8/25/2014 12:20:00 PM)

    you pray and sit meditating on him for strength and peace to sait through the day excellent thoughts (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 6,809 Points Salini Nair (8/23/2014 3:52:00 AM)

    Yet in the stillness of your soul
    There creeps in a melancholy
    Dislodging the serenity
    And shattering the dreams
    Over the thought of a last grief………
    very well crafted....enjoyed its charm......................... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/22/2014 1:35:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. I loved the flow of words...The message is very true. Even in the midst of happiness, sad memories never leave us. It comes back to us unknowingly or knowingly. In fact one couldn't enjoy even the small happy moment, this fact you have beautifully conveyed through this poem. I loved reading it.

    Thank you Sir, for the lovely comments for my poems and for the wishes...Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,266 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (8/22/2014 1:25:00 AM)

    indeed it happens, at happier times don't leave us sad memories.
    a nice poem. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,836 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/22/2014 2:18:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Pradipjee......I am humbled

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (8/21/2014 11:48:00 PM)

    .... emlfions are so random... and they change so quickly.. we hav no contrrol in what we think..
    A beautiful writw (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,836 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/22/2014 2:19:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Kanav......I am humbled

  • Gold Star - 31,074 Points Valsa George (8/21/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    The image drawn of a pleasant serene morn is lovely! Even as we sit in prayerful meditation asking for strength to scale through the challenges the new day is going to present, there can be disturbing thoughts caused by the memory of a past grief! Human mind is so tantalizing that it flits from grief to joy and from joy to grief! Sweet poem! (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,836 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/22/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Valsa......I am humbled

  • Rookie - 219 Points Prasanna Kumari (8/21/2014 10:53:00 PM)

    however much we write still there will be more to write about nature and its association with the human mind and nature....beautiful.... (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,836 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/22/2014 2:20:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Prasanna......I am humbled

  • Rookie - 219 Points Prasanna Kumari (8/21/2014 10:53:00 PM)

    however much we write still there will be more to write about nature and its association with the human mind and nature....beautiful.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,552 Points Gajanan Mishra (8/21/2014 12:35:00 PM)

    air smelling sweet, good writing. (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 16,836 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/22/2014 2:21:00 AM)

    Many many thanks........Gajananji......I am humbled

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 21, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 22, 2014


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