abdul razaq

Rookie - 0 Points (august 10,1971 / faisalabad, pakistan)

In The Lap Of The Sun - Poem by abdul razaq

There are many kids (mean nine planets)
Tiny and huge
In the lap of the Sun
They have been living peacefully
Since centuries.....................
In the lap of the Sun
All are obedient, humble and modest
Lovely and charming
In the lap of the Sun
In the evening, they sleep
When darken covers
In the lap of the Sun
They also listen sweat songs while swings
Of love
In the lap of the Sun
In the morning, they get up early
Do their work
In the lap of the Sun
They do not quarrel with one another
Do not snatch their brother's property
In the lap of the Sun
They believe the proverb'union is strength'
All are honest too
In the lap of the Sun
All of them abide by orders of their father(mean Sun)
Without arguing
In the lap of the Sun
We can say, Sun as a head
proud of it, s tribe
march 29,2008


Comments about In The Lap Of The Sun by abdul razaq

  • Rookie I AM SOOO OUT OF HERE (6/19/2008 9:36:00 PM)

    Very well done my friend. Philosphy at it's best.
    Will be reading more of your fine work.
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  • Rookie Cathleen Hodgkinson (4/6/2008 10:18:00 PM)

    Abdul- I agree with Greenwolfe 1962...'This is a work of an artist. a solid element in a universe of chaos'. I really do like your perspective with each of your writings that I've read...keep writing! Cathleen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Greenwolfe 1962 (4/4/2008 9:57:00 AM)

    That's certainly an interesting philosophical perspective.
    This is the work of an artist. He makes use of one thing to explain another.
    A solid element in a universe of chaos.

    GW62 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Katherine Wiley (3/31/2008 12:59:00 AM)

    abdul-you have several poems now, and they are very nice! I liked this one. kat (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, March 29, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 29, 2008


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