abdul razaq

Rookie - 0 Points (august 10,1971 / faisalabad, pakistan)

You Are Naughty - Poem by abdul razaq

Sun
You are naughty
Sees us bare
Does not wait outside
Sun
You are naughty
Enters the homes
Without permission
Sun
You are cruel
Throw bomb of fire
Does't care young and old
Sun
You are spy
Listen our conversation
Have our secrets
Sun
You are naughty
Play hide and seek with clouds
Clouds are your rival too
Yet
You give much respect to it

April 4,2008
abdulrazaq


Comments about You Are Naughty by abdul razaq

  • Rookie *Emminem* + Emma + ENGLISH (6/17/2008 7:35:00 PM)

    Excellent, thankyou very much and good, keep up with the good work, Em (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Gina PrettyBrownEyes (4/5/2008 3:59:00 PM)

    i like it! the sun really is pretty obtrusive in our lives and i love the personification here. nice job! :) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, April 6, 2008


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