Linda Ori

Rookie - 105 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

' Infinite Depths Of Heaven - Poem by Linda Ori

From infinite depths of heaven,
warrior clouds
ignite the universe
to flame.....................
Descending
upon the unsuspecting
Tranquility
of a sleeping earth.................
about to be
awakened by

a kiss.


6/07/2009
*written as a response to 'Gently Upon The Still'.


Comments about ' Infinite Depths Of Heaven by Linda Ori

  • Silver Star - 4,455 Points Ken E Hall (10/14/2009 11:41:00 PM)

    Lovely poem of showers heaven sent and ending just how I would love to wake up, how could we do without this wonder first but not last visit
    uavaniceday
    regards (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Nikunj Sharma (8/24/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    Sweet and serene and comforting as monsoon showers on heated earth...gud one (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Lyday (6/21/2009 3:19:00 AM)

    Ha ha, that surprised me. I was expecting something bad to happen and then we got kissed. Very clever. Good poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/18/2009 2:37:00 AM)

    Excellent, lovely, short, cute 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 188 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (6/12/2009 8:12:00 PM)

    this is a perfect example of allowing th eemotions to shape the form... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (6/12/2009 3:27:00 AM)

    A superb canvass of spiritual grandeur culminating in a pair of lips. From the sublime to the sublimely personal. Beautiful indeed. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 782 Points Indira Renganathan (6/11/2009 3:01:00 AM)

    Superb imagination....a good flow of words...nectar pouring10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (6/11/2009 2:14:00 AM)

    wow ma'am...this amazing and i really felt these lines...hey it is bit like a phrase from a thriller...this is something different from what i v read from yours....
    shows you are versatile writer ma'am...10++

    with lots of love shan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,723 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (6/8/2009 12:19:00 PM)

    Perchance to dream a nightmare than be freed from its spell by a gentle kiss.The moods that colour our days.A ten from me, mostly because of its imagery and depth. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Patrick McFarland (6/7/2009 2:36:00 PM)

    Nice imagery Linda.10+ (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,327 Points Saadat Tahir (6/7/2009 2:12:00 PM)

    i think sid got it mixed up
    kisses turn frogs to princes......
    why turn it around..; -)

    linda beautiful words.....like rain stirs earth so do kisses, aching humans
    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (6/7/2009 1:43:00 PM)

    To be awakened by a kiss is simply bliss.To be kissed by a hog may transform you into...a frog...
    Sid.x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/7/2009 1:42:00 PM)

    Wonderful expression of the event. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 84 Points Tony Miller (6/7/2009 1:22:00 PM)

    yes both poems are terrible good coupling (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 7, 2009



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