From infinite depths of heaven,
warrior clouds
ignite the universe
to flame.....................
Descending
upon the unsuspecting
Tranquility
of a sleeping earth.................
about to be
awakened by
a kiss.
6/07/2009
*written as a response to 'Gently Upon The Still'.
To be awakened by a kiss is simply bliss.To be kissed by a hog may transform you into...a frog... Sid.x
i think sid got it mixed up kisses turn frogs to princes...... why turn it around..; -) linda beautiful words.....like rain stirs earth so do kisses, aching humans cheers
Lovely poem of showers heaven sent and ending just how I would love to wake up, how could we do without this wonder first but not last visit uavaniceday regards
Sweet and serene and comforting as monsoon showers on heated earth...gud one
Ha ha, that surprised me. I was expecting something bad to happen and then we got kissed. Very clever. Good poetry.
this is a perfect example of allowing th eemotions to shape the form...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
yes both poems are terrible good coupling