It is rarely revealed, but inside the heart
There are sealed places where differing depths
Of spiritual love exist. Compartments,
Like caverns, kept clean and never bereft
Of attention. Within them lie neatly
Folded pages of deep emotion on which
We write stages reached by love. Completely
Free of pretension we sift them, admitting
Sincere affection, and inside my heart
You reign supreme - - in every compartment.
This is such a tender poem Fay...and so true...I can relate to it...Fi 10+++
Bursting with a beauty that is spiritual! Well done my friend!
This is a mere proof why your poetry speaks directly to a reader's heart. You have a fine touch in expressing thoughts, dear Fay. Beautiful! ; -)
The compactness of though a piece of flesh i.e., a heart is indeed very much appreciable for the nature has made the organ so hard as far as absorbing feelings and emotions are concerned. A true love seeps through the fleshy compartments of heart and carve its affection in a wonderful calligraphic manner creating the sense of adoration and applause for the person you love the most. A good heart is always capable of playing hide and seek with full refinement......a very wonder theme Ms. Slimm...10/10
Once again, Fay, your words have spun magic and revealed the secrets of the human heart. The heart indeed holds many places where love is savored and deeply treasured, and often when evaluated one's life, you sort through those long ago valued emotions to see if the new love one feels measure up to or exceeds those past cherished memories of true love. Another very beautiful poem. Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
loved this piece...it spoke to my soul..i take this into my favs