Inside Outside Poem by Kranthi Pothineni
Inside Outside
Ocean looks still outside
But its tale differs inside
Swan looks clam outside
But under water its not so
Why is it so? Asked one kid
Few icebergs look tiny outside
But they are huge inside water
Skin of humans varies outside
But color of blood inside is same
Why is it so? He asked me again
Coconut is too hard outside
Tell is it the same inside too?
Many tell many things outside
Tell me are the same inside too?
He asked me looking into eyes
I smiled at his eyes and said
For eyes you look like a kid
But are you the same inside?
For eyes I am older then you
But is it true inside? I asked him
very interesting way of writing this poem, I like it a lot(10)
Last stanza made the poem inside outside too. Interesting read. Best Wishes. Naseer
The adage of conflict between ‘Inside’- ‘Outside’ well poemed! Ms. Nivedita UK
Yes, the truth is always inside, isn't it? Well expressed the eternal conflict of outside appearances and inside realities.Keep writing.
Many tell many things outside Tell me are the same inside too? wonderful meditative poem 10+++++++++
this is very well put, and the question/answer game compliments it. a ten
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 12:20:56 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Keen life observations. Interesting.