Interior Twilight Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Interior Twilight

Rating: 2.0


Rocking to rhythms around firelight of yesterday's camp fire,
being lit, illuminating midnight darkness so life can be seen
and touched once again.

Living in depths of another dimension, just to not have to
deal with this one right now, beguiling spirits of each night-
time fire, rising higher and higher inside my mind.

Monday, August 25, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: poem
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kay Staley 25 August 2014

Interesting use of drastic language. It leaves a vague feeling that you remember after the poem is over, but the poem itself is not memorable. The weak point: no rhymes makes it an easy one to slip right out of the readers mind. The strong point: The name is very catching and the poem sucks you into its mystery. Its good in the moment, but without rhymes it wont be remembered.

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