RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Gold Star - 29,226 Points (October 6,1950 / New Jersey)

Men! ! ! ! - Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Men lament that they have no time to do things
needed being done.

Yet, they sit wasting time, watching T.V. for
hours at a time.

Not associating it with their apparent laziness
and lack of initiative.


Comments about Men! ! ! ! by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

  • Rookie - 487 Points Albert Ahearn (7/29/2015 5:44:00 AM)

    I'm sure the same can be said for women. Thanks Rose Ann for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,656 Points Rajkamal P.j (7/26/2015 9:44:00 PM)

    Really fine. Congrats (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,145 Points Darlene Walsh (7/26/2015 8:32:00 PM)

    Bob usually gets everything done, I'm the one who needs days to be longer. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,398 Points Ayman Parray (7/26/2015 3:24:00 AM)

    A very interesting point of view. True for many but not all men. I have known some great hardworking men and women in my life. I will try my best not to be among the men in the poem. Thanks, for sharing... Ayman. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,607 Points Points Of View (7/22/2015 3:12:00 AM)

    Some men are like bossy type..just sit down and watched TV scrolling the remote control..
    They just wait to be called for food or rather serve him with food and drink..
    Don't talk to him nor disturb him.Call him, he can't hear you his mind goes inside the movie. :) (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 700 Points P Gleeson (7/21/2015 3:18:00 PM)

    Interesting poem, acceptance comes to mind of every human that do what they do..because they do..thanks for the visit and kind comments ~ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,012 Points Allotey Abossey (7/3/2015 4:13:00 PM)

    Reading the content of the poem, I realise that the word men, in the poem doesn't only refer to the masculine gender but a general term for humans. You are right, many men spend so much time on things that do not yield much importance... I believe this is a wake up call. God bless you (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,500 Points Uma Ram (6/29/2015 1:07:00 AM)

    Very true of men ma'am. Thanks for sharing ma'am. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,508 Points Kim Barney (6/28/2015 3:21:00 PM)

    Hey,
    we're not all like that! I rarely watch TV these days. There's nothing on worth watching. I did watch Virunga on Netflix a couple of months ago, and just submitted a poem with that title today.
    Great poem in any case (and I know a few women like that, too) . (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,692 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (5/17/2015 3:31:00 PM)

    A wake up call! Powerful priority principle my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,164 Points Herbert Guitang (5/14/2015 5:23:00 AM)

    Nice poem depending on the maturity of either men or women.A good relity check. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,397 Points Brian Stafford (4/16/2015 3:19:00 PM)

    I waste my time on this website, don't have time for tv, but I know that of women who do! ! ! ! he he (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,261 Points Smoky Hoss (4/6/2015 9:55:00 PM)

    I love your poem here, really! I am a man, or at least a 52 year old male! Been everywhere, seen everything (yup, I am a male...bragging right off!) , and here I now am; drinking Brandy, reading poetry, and listening to Tom Petty sing You Don't Know How It Feels, and maybe you just don't, or perhaps I don't, or better still, I bet none of us do, know how it feels to be me that is; but let me tell ya, I don't give a hang for the tv if it's not an old black-n-white movie, and I sure do not lament over what aledgedly needs doing, because frankly, I do not care! Ha ha. I just love doing this, and not worrying about anything else at the moment. I really do love your poem though, it's so close to the general truth, but don't forget about us old men out here on the edges... we are a bit different, 'off' some would even say! Write-on... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,384 Points Akhtar Jawad (3/31/2015 5:38:00 AM)

    I wish you could come at my house and see all that you have described in this lovely short poem. Just only one difference and I know you are intelligent enough to guess...................10 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 687 Points David Lessard (3/12/2015 11:22:00 PM)

    Ouch! That hurt. You have hit the nail on the head for many men. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,864 Points Joseph Harlacher (3/12/2015 10:41:00 PM)

    justly the other day i gave my TV away! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (12/26/2014 5:15:00 PM)

    Short and to the point. We all are guilty of this action
    at one time or another. Hopefully it won't get the best
    of us. Nice. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,433 Points Galina Italyanskaya (12/7/2014 7:07:00 PM)

    I met such men. And to be honest I met such women too. It's more about the lack of motivation, I think.
    But I should say that men are getting lost easier than women, maybe because women can't allow themselves to get lost when their children want to eat)
    Nice work! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,692 Points Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon (10/18/2014 7:33:00 PM)

    Sailing in a sea of sadness yet a true testament of many men! Well done my friend! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,578 Points Achill Lad (10/15/2014 8:23:00 AM)

    Female chauvinism. Ha ha. All men are not like this RoseAnn. A tongue in cheek write, intending to provoke a response. Naughy! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 7, 2014


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