Treasure Island

Angel Jimenez


Its my fault


I was like in heaven, everything was so perfect, until the day i made a STUPID mistake.Every moment was so perfect, until the day I made that STUPID mistake. And I still making mistakes. Life is not the one to blame. Why am I making the same stupid mistakes? I hurted an innocent angel, I cant live thinking about that. Im being a coward, by blamig life. Its my mistake, I command my life, Its my fault. I wish i could receive another chance, but it seems I dont diserve it. Im forgived, but that does not cure the pain in my heart. The bullet is still there, and I hope one day it can come out. I cant sleep, thinking about my mistake, I wont repeat it, I swear wont repeat the same mistake. It hurts, buts that my lesson. I need to stand up, and keep on walking

Submitted: Sunday, January 11, 2009
Edited: Monday, January 12, 2009

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  • Ana Zaldivar (1/12/2009 6:04:00 PM)

    you have to be more creative... don't use the same words the other poet does.... and you know what i mean... improve your grammar... try to separate the sentences by making four-lined paragraphs.. and i know you'll make the same mistake you made.. 'cause it's not the first time you've done it.... i'll give you a five...4 points for expressing your feelings and 1 for trying. you have to keep on writting, trying.. to make it to the 10 points (Report) Reply

  • Cory Jensen (1/11/2009 8:39:00 PM)

    I just noticed that the word 'hurted' isn't suppose to be like that. its should be 'I've hurt' not hurted. I thought I would just let you know! :)

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