Jealousy Is The Nature Of The Beast... Poem by Annette Aitken

Jealousy Is The Nature Of The Beast...

Rating: 4.5


Jealousy Is The Nature Of The Beast.

Don't tell me I don't know how you feel
I couldn't possibly feel that need.
Like a thousand hidden voices
whispering deep inside your head
telling you
this is who you are.

You fight repression
the growing need, rising like a wave
prodding, teasing, prickling in your mind
but the whispers get louder
till they are screaming out now.

The only voice you hear
the only voice you want to hear
and you belong to this shadow
you become a dark passenger to it
inevitably you will succumb.

To fight against it is fatal
as it will overpower you into submission
the addiction, the need to overcome
the willpower to succeed,
demise with every single thought.

As the power of the wave
engulfs you
rendering you somewhat helpless
as jealousy is the nature's beast.

Saturday, November 12, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: jealousy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A very mixed up mind....
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 12 November 2016

Yeah, jealousy is a sin one should not give shelter in ones mind. A nice message to all to shun it. Very nice.10+++

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 November 2016

It destroys everything. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Ging Taping 14 November 2016

Jealousy ruined relationship. It creates fire and burnt..but somehow when you are jealous it means you love the person so much it sounds cute. But when it's too much it's irritating :)

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Terry Craddock 09 January 2017

Jealousy Is The Nature Of The Beast.' yes and sadly there is often a beastly reason for jealousy, the reality of betrayal is a bitter blow below the belt

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Tom Billsborough 21 November 2016

You have written one of your best poems here, Annette. As Robert says it builds to a fine crescendo. This one has to go to my favourites' list. It's as good as anything as I have read in a long time

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Bill Cantrell 20 November 2016

.......you belong to this shadow..you will become a dark passenger to it...Annette, this is superb poetry my friend, i am very impressed..a well deserved 10! ! !

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Christopher Tye 18 November 2016

Really good poem, jealousy is always a negative emotion and a sign of unhappiness but we can outgrow and move beyond so things when we are happy.

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Savita Tyagi 17 November 2016

Very well expressed poem Annette. Our darkest emotions have an energy that always tries to take us down. This fight with in us is the most challenging fight. Thank you for sharing.

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