Valerie Dohren

Gold Star - 5,657 Points (13 January 1947 / Southport)

Jewels - Poem by Valerie Dohren

White diamonds sparkle in the sand
And speckle darkened skies
Green em`ralds flash in glist`ning seas
Then glint in envious eyes

Blue sapphires dance in wand`ring streams
To shine in summer`s hue
With amethyst in heather set
In lavender there too

Bright rubies sway in poppy fields
To glow in fires of red
Are captured in the flow of blood
From heroes lying dead

Then pearls so lustre in the clouds
As through the sun defined
Whilst topaz sets my heart aglow
In fields of corn entwined

The golden lambent sunshine glows
When risen high at noon
With misty robes of silver then
Soft draped around the moon

Such beauty lingers `pon the earth
On mother nature`s gown
These burnished jewels yet deeply set
In her adorning crown


Comments about Jewels by Valerie Dohren

  • Josh Dinkin (10/21/2012 10:06:00 PM)

    this one is epic. it blew my mind! (Report) Reply

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  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (9/14/2012 12:50:00 AM)

    Wow awesome! Took me some time to find it but i was rewarded. D analogy u drew is impressive.8 * (Report) Reply

  • Constance K Yost (6/5/2012 4:12:00 PM)

    this has lovely flow and great imagination-I enjoy it's rhythm and happiness. Constance Yost (Report) Reply

  • Patti Masterman (4/2/2012 11:59:00 AM)

    There is a lot of artistry here. The best writers can make perplexity simple and elegant, so you scarcely see the darning needles feverishly connecting the threads..this is one of those jewels, can be read over and over and can take something new away each time..profound. (Report) Reply

  • V S (3/28/2012 1:52:00 AM)

    Gems are effectively beautiful,
    set them on platinum and gold,
    prettier the precious jewel,
    so is your poem marvel.. (Report) Reply

  • Ency Bearis (3/26/2012 8:27:00 AM)

    A gem of verses, a remarkable write. (Report) Reply

  • Dave Walker (3/23/2012 3:17:00 PM)

    A truly beautiful poem, a wonderful write. (Report) Reply

  • Robert Green Robert Green (3/22/2012 4:40:00 AM)

    Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Eric Cockrell (3/21/2012 4:57:00 PM)

    and the greatest jewels of all... human hearts! (Report) Reply

  • Heather Wilson Heather Wilson (3/21/2012 4:11:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, really a jewel, just a joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (3/20/2012 7:42:00 AM)

    Your poem is sparkling! Very nice! (Report) Reply

  • Danny Draper (3/20/2012 3:41:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, gentle and persuasive rhymes and imagery sublime. (Report) Reply

  • Smoky Hoss (3/19/2012 1:38:00 PM)

    Perfectly wonderful, such natural beauty! Your words are always a treasure. (Report) Reply

  • Diane Hine Diane Hine (3/19/2012 9:37:00 AM)

    Perfectly gorgeous poem! ....................... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, April 16, 2012


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