I was hanging out with friends
Holding hands in hands
All of a sudden, I saw an Angel
I got absent-minded for ages
Staring at this seduction in nature
I could not keep the secret
To my friends I let it out
I kept on looking at the creature
My eyes turned blue by then
My heart felt a peaceful burden
A burden of eternal pure love
She was such an Angel to love
She was wearing joy and peace
I was so stunned to meet her
I turned weaker than ever
Amazingly, her name was Joyce
I was insanely dump in love with her
It was a never-forgotten moment
A way better than entertainment
She was my peace, my Angel, my Joyce...
The first angel is often the best. Thanks for sharing, Heritier. Peace
Ahhh, the innocence of first love, it is so pure and lovely, never to be forgotten. Great poem, can feel the peace within you through this poem. Thank you for sharing it, RoseAnn
Thank you very much indeed Chinedu Dike and all of you who painted stunning comments on this poem
Beautiful depiction of love at first sight, well articulated and nicely penned from the heart with conviction. Thanks for sharing.
Yes Patricia Grantham, very special she was. Thanks for your comment indeed
A beautiful poem about your angel. She was someone who was very special to you. Love your sentiments and sweet thoughts.
my peace, my Angel, my Joyce.....................beautiful.
Thanks for your comment Akhtar Jawad