Khairul Ahsan

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Just... - Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Just a spark can kindle a fire
That can consume a forest,
Just a touch can spark a lust
And create a Mount Everest.

Just a whisper into the ears,
Can stop a baby from crying,
Another kind can send a man
Atop the Himalayas flying!

Just a smile can change a thought
It can untie the toughest knot,
It can mean a signal shot,
To make a cold bed sizzling hot.

Topic(s) of this poem: passion

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Just a smile, a look, a touch, a teardrop, a sigh, a whisper or even a thought may evoke far reaching consequences. Deep emotional transformations can be brought about by just any one or more of these.

17 November 2013
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Comments about Just... by Khairul Ahsan

  • Khairul Ahsan (3/8/2014 12:46:00 AM)

    @Martina Danielova
    I am so glad that you loved my poem. Thanks a lot for reading my poem and leaving your kind thoughts here.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (3/8/2014 12:30:00 AM)

    @Morose Mermaid,
    Thanks for your kind appreciation of my poem. I am glad that you found it beautiful.
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  • Martina Danielova (12/2/2013 4:03:00 PM)

    i loved this poem of yours. It is so enlightening. It remains us how little is enough to bring the peace and silence into our souls. (Report) Reply

  • Morose Mermaid (11/26/2013 12:48:00 AM)

    just... a nice write indeed... really a JUST.. beautiful.. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/23/2013 9:30:00 AM)

    @ Naida Nepascua Supnet,
    Glad to see your smile.
    'the lines are witty and will bring one into some thoughts.'
    Liked this line.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/23/2013 8:43:00 AM)

    @Valerie Dohren,
    Thanks for your kind words.
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  • Naida Nepascua Supnet (11/22/2013 10:11:00 AM)

    haha i enjoyed this poem
    it brings smile
    the lines are witty and will bring one into some thoughts.
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  • Valerie Dohren (11/21/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    Much truth and wisdom in this write - it's the little things that can make all the difference, and indeed can change the world. Very well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan (11/21/2013 2:55:00 AM)

    @ Susan Lacovara,
    Appreciate your comment. Thanks.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/20/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    @ Kevin Patrick,
    Thanks for the kind words. I am inspired.
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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/20/2013 3:45:00 AM)

    @ Ethan Ying,
    I am glad to know that you liked it so much. Thanks!
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  • Khairul Ahsan (11/19/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    @ Beauteous Victory,
    You have made my day, dear poet! Thanks.
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  • Susan Lacovara (11/19/2013 8:06:00 PM)

    Just enough...To uplift the heart...left me smiling, my friend...PEACE (Report) Reply

  • (11/18/2013 11:39:00 PM)

    I love the rhyming in this its sweet and very sentimental, a truly rousing read. (Report) Reply

  • Ethan Ying (11/18/2013 11:19:00 PM)

    So short, but so clear. I just loved the line
    'Just a smile can change a thought
    It can untie the toughest knot, '
    This is my favorite poem of yours that you have so far written.
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, March 8, 2014

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